Post by cynder401 on Nov 11, 2009 20:50:25 GMT -5
(This is a story i am writing about my warrior cats that i made up)
Boomingstar stood gracefully on the top rock looking down on the others. The apprentices were fooling around, and the kits were playing like normal. Goofstur was helping out Angelfur pick some moss for the elders. Angelfur looked around the windclan territory. She spotted Murkystripe hunting. She dropped the moss and stared. Goofstur waved a paw in front of her. ''Angel! come on girl get a hold of yourself!'' he tried to get her in focus again. She shook her head. ''Sorry, i uh, got a little distracted'' she explained. She picked up the moss again and walked along side Goofstur. ''Well get your act together... you know how grumpy the elders can get'' he scolded.
Angelfur rolled her eyes and they brought the moss to the elders den. One of the oldest elders stepped forward. ''Good gracious you kids take too long! hmph..'' the elder complained. The 2 of them made a fake grin then walked away. Goofstur flicked his tail at Angel and said, ''I have to go, training with my apprentice Mosspaw.'' Angelfur nodded and went to see Murkystripe. She sighed and confronted him. ''h- hi there..'' she greeted shakily. He turned to her and blushed. ''oh, uh, hi there'' he greeted back. They smiled at eachother and then the leader called the meeting, ruining the moment. Angelfur went to sit beside Goofstur. All cats looked up at their leader and deputy. The deputy, Moonheart, never looked impressed about anything. He was always criticizing other cats eve if they did a perfect job. Boomingstar flicked his tail with pride and spoke, ''All cats of windclan, i have gathered you for an important meeting!'' Angelfur turned her eyes straight to Murkysstripe. She didn't pay attention for the last 10 minutes till Goofstur sneezed, which got her attention. The leader continued on, ''So congratulations to Beachpaw, who has now became Beachfur.'' Everybody cheered for the new warrior. Angelfur turned her attention outside the camp. She could see some cats coming.... Who are they?
to be continued
Boomingstar stood gracefully on the top rock looking down on the others. The apprentices were fooling around, and the kits were playing like normal. Goofstur was helping out Angelfur pick some moss for the elders. Angelfur looked around the windclan territory. She spotted Murkystripe hunting. She dropped the moss and stared. Goofstur waved a paw in front of her. ''Angel! come on girl get a hold of yourself!'' he tried to get her in focus again. She shook her head. ''Sorry, i uh, got a little distracted'' she explained. She picked up the moss again and walked along side Goofstur. ''Well get your act together... you know how grumpy the elders can get'' he scolded.
Angelfur rolled her eyes and they brought the moss to the elders den. One of the oldest elders stepped forward. ''Good gracious you kids take too long! hmph..'' the elder complained. The 2 of them made a fake grin then walked away. Goofstur flicked his tail at Angel and said, ''I have to go, training with my apprentice Mosspaw.'' Angelfur nodded and went to see Murkystripe. She sighed and confronted him. ''h- hi there..'' she greeted shakily. He turned to her and blushed. ''oh, uh, hi there'' he greeted back. They smiled at eachother and then the leader called the meeting, ruining the moment. Angelfur went to sit beside Goofstur. All cats looked up at their leader and deputy. The deputy, Moonheart, never looked impressed about anything. He was always criticizing other cats eve if they did a perfect job. Boomingstar flicked his tail with pride and spoke, ''All cats of windclan, i have gathered you for an important meeting!'' Angelfur turned her eyes straight to Murkysstripe. She didn't pay attention for the last 10 minutes till Goofstur sneezed, which got her attention. The leader continued on, ''So congratulations to Beachpaw, who has now became Beachfur.'' Everybody cheered for the new warrior. Angelfur turned her attention outside the camp. She could see some cats coming.... Who are they?
to be continued