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Post by cynder401 on Nov 10, 2009 23:01:53 GMT -5
The Shadow
Mark was out late again with his friends, he knew he was going to get in trouble with his dad. As him and his friends made their way to Mark's house, they saw a strange light. It was someones car light, they hid in a bush, and looked to see who it was. Mark's friend James peeked over the bush and looked at the car. ''dude it's just an old man'' he said making everyone laugh. Mark rolled his eyes at James and got up. He dusted off his pants and punched James in the arm lightly, like a friendly punch. James rubbed his arm as if it hurt, but Mark knew it didn't. They laughed their way back to Mark's place and said their goodbyes. Mark waved to them while walking in the house. His dad was standing right there with his hands on his hips. Mark flinched as soon as he turned on the light and saw his dad. ''Dah!'' he yelled softly not to wake his sister. His dad had his grumpy face on and was about to yell really loud at Mark, but instead he calmed his facial expression and said nothing. He made a growling noise at Mark and walked back up stairs. Mark looked weirdly at his dad and went up stairs. He opened his door and walked into his dark room. He turned on the light and plopped on his bed. He lay down to think about some stuff. He fell asleep instantly and his father turned off his light. Mark was tossing and turning. He was having a dream. And not a good one......
Tell me what you think and I'll type more
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Post by Lige on Nov 11, 2009 15:41:28 GMT -5
Suspenseful...write more!
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Post by cynder401 on Nov 11, 2009 15:48:45 GMT -5
Inside Mark's dream he was walking down a dark hallway, there was a light on the other side. He tried to reach it but it kept getting further and further. Then when he reached the end of the light he saw something... it was an evil looking shadow. The shadow scratched right through Mark without hurting him. Then it reappeared again and laughed a horrifying laugh. ''YOU WILL DIE A PAINFUL DEATH MY BOY!! A HA HA HAAAA'' it said with the horrible laugh. Mark covered his heart and stepped back. He finally woke up breathing heavily. His sister had woken him. ''brother! quick we have to go!'' his sister whispered quietly to him while shaking his arms. Mark made a confused look then got out of bed. His sister led him donwstairs and he saw his father standing there. ''The neighbors are having a baby! were going to give our support!'' said his father. Mark sighed and got his shoes on. He walked outside and stepped into the ambulance with his sister. ''Why are we going to support her dad?'' asked Mark. ''You know she lives by her self... we have to be there!'' explained his father. His father got in the car and Mark decided to stay in the ambulance with his sister. ''Sis, why are you staying in the ambulance...'' he asked her with a sigh. She hopped up and down in her seat with excitement. ''cause it's fun!'' she exclaimed. They were well on their way to the hospital... Mark thought about his dream... what could it mean?
to be continued again
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Post by Lige on Nov 11, 2009 18:07:18 GMT -5
Again, add some more.
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Post by cynder401 on Nov 11, 2009 18:18:45 GMT -5
Mark was almost falling asleep in the ambulance, he tried not to sleep because he didn't want to have the dream again. He yawned and looked at his sister. She was fast asleep, and the hospital was still an hour away. Mark sighed and looked out the window. There was something on the sidewalk.... it was the shadow. It's evil eyes staring right up at him. Mark's eyes widened in fright as he looked at the shadow. It smiled evilly and disappeared. Mark blinked then rubbed his eyes. ''Okay this is weird..'' Mark whispered to himself. His sister was snoring her head off then woke up almost screaming. Mark covered her mouth before she could. ''Sis, what's wrong with you? you want to disturb the driver?'' he scolded his sister. She rubbed her eyes and looked around. ''I had a bad dream! there was this weird scary shadow thing chasing me!'' she explained to her brother. Mark's eyes widened again. He put his hand on his chest and could feel his heart pumping like crazy. They finally made it to the hospital and got out of the ambulance. His sister went running out of the car and he walked out slowly. He was still shaky with fright. He calmed down for a minute and thought, ''Don't think about it now.... maybe you wont see it again'' As they all walked into the hospital the shadow... was following them...
more comments please X3
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Post by Lige on Nov 11, 2009 18:21:03 GMT -5
*is scared* Oh my God! I think I just saw a shadow thingy... xD
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Post by cynder401 on Nov 11, 2009 18:30:57 GMT -5
Mark sat down in a chair beside his sister. It was quiet and barely anyone was there. One old women, and 2 teenage girls. Mark watched his sister look at a magazine upside down. He rolled his eyes and flipped the magazine right side up. His sister looked up at him and snarled. Mark chuckled and looked at the clock. It was 4:00 am. Everyone looked tired. Meanwhile, the shadow snuck up on the floor where no one could see him. He made it to the kitchen and opened the fridge. ''No bloody meat!'' he yelled as he slammed the refrigerator. The shadow swept across the floor and made it back to the waiting room. He stared at Mark and his sister. ''This is just too easy!'' he said while laughing. He slid right through the floor and hid until the time was right. Everyone sat in the waiting room for 5 hours. His sister was still playing with the toys the hospital had, and Mark was looking at a magazine. His father was pacing back and forth. No he wasn't worried, that's what he does when bored. Mark watched his father go back and forth. Finally Carol came out of the room with her baby. ''It's a boy!'' she said with glee. Mark looked at the baby and said nothing. The shadow popped up from beneath the floor and kept watch of the baby. ''ugh not another human in this world!'' the shadow complained. It snuck back into the ambulance and waited impatiently.
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